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Title: Which sentence is correct, clear, and concise? Post by: Angela26kristin on Feb 4, 2018 Which sentence is correct, clear, and concise?
A) Through the sport of fishing, my daughter has learned the art of being patient, how to identify various species, and becoming independent. B) Becoming independent, the art of patience, and how to identify various species are some of the things which my daughter has learned through the sport of fishing. C) Through fishing, my daughter has learned patience, independence, and species identification. D) Through fishing, my daughter has learned to be patient, independence, and she's even learned to identify various species. Title: Which sentence is correct, clear, and concise? Post by: jacobhollyy on Feb 4, 2018 Content hidden
Title: Which sentence is correct, clear, and concise? Post by: Angela26kristin on Feb 4, 2018 Great!!! Will mark the topic solved
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