INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Some of the coordinate ideas are faulty because they overlap (have almost the same meaning) or are not coordinate (equal). Cross out the overlapping or uncoordinate idea. Before buying a computer, people should consider personal needs, expenses, available software, computer capabilities, and costs.
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Ques. 2INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Revise each thesis sentence so that the points previewed are in parallel form. You may need to add, delete, or alter a word or words. Going on a date requires money, time, and finding a partner.
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Ques. 3INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Revise each thesis sentence so that the points previewed are in parallel form. You may need to add, delete, or alter a word or words. Firefighters help society by fighting fires, helping accident victims, and they can volunteer in community organizations.
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Ques. 4INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Revise each thesis sentence so that the points previewed are in parallel form. You may need to add, delete, or alter a word or words. To eat right, working out hard, and sleeping well are important to health-conscious people.
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Ques. 5INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Revise each thesis sentence so that the points previewed are in parallel form. You may need to add, delete, or alter a word or words. Disadvantages of shopping at membership warehouse stores include buying large quantities, needing more time to shop, and to experience a limited selection.
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Ques. 6INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Revise each thesis sentence so that the points previewed are in parallel form. You may need to add, delete, or alter a word or words. Comforting a child, to provide a pleasant home environment, and teaching a child are all aspects of parenting.
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Ques. 7INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Revise each thesis sentence so that the points previewed are in parallel form. You may need to add, delete, or alter a word or words. Jerry's retirement years were pleasant because he had bought land, invested in stocks, and saving some money.
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