yeah the thing is I don't know how to word it properly, I think i'm just really confused, do you mind helping me starting it off?

Why not use what I wrote earlier? I thought it made more sense

like how you talked about redemptive suffering itself, or the sentence that stated "Suffering during pilgrimages can range from physical to spiritual. Suffering unites us to the Cross of Jesus Christ who suffered. Pilgrimage suffering is marked with the hope of the resurrection." ?

The second one. If you find it too short, tie in "redemptive suffering" in with the response

Alright I will do that rn

Trust me, it made a lot more sense, at least to me

Okay I fixed it
Suffering during pilgrimages can range from physical to spiritual. Suffering unites us to the Cross of Jesus Christ who suffered. Pilgrimage suffering is marked with the hope of the resurrection. Another thing is redemptive suffering, which involves intervening to save others from injustice or bad, as well as saving us from the bondage of our sins, in which, in this instance, Jesus Christ died for us. Generally speaking, this form of misery can be very meaningful, it makes it easier to deeply reconnect with God, as well as encouraging others to improve the desire to love God for eternity.

Is there anything else I should add?
 

No, leave it. That's good

Okay Thanks!