IT IS found later in the play that Claudius doesn't seem to grasp Hamlet's intentions, but easily perceives him as a threat and chooses to act against him. King Claudius is both articulate and well-spoken, two qualities that compliment his cynical and risky personality, therefore rendering him as the villain. His main contribution to the theme of revenge is how he influences the decisions taken by Laertes to seek vengeance. The King is a central stakeholder in the death of Hamlet, Laertes, and Queen Gertrude.
Don't use words like "it's" in a formal essay.
Be consistent. If you use Claudius, don't address him as "King Claudius" later on.
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Unlike Hamlet and Claudius, Laertes plays an important role in the development of the main character. Aside from his father's death, Laertes seeks a particular form of vengeance than Hamlet's. He's driven by emotion, doesn't over-analyze anything that he is already doing, and simply acts. He is a reckless performer, in which nothing can distract him from his revenge. And of that, he is easily influenced, especially by the former king Claudius.
The first sentence doesn't contribute to the topic, and if you decide to keep it, be specific as to who the "main character" is. I would completely erase it.
"Aside from his father's death" Laertes' father died? Is that what you meant? Forgot the plot again
Apart from that, I fixed the grammatical errors, and the sentence sounds great.
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