My Essay Is 'Differences Between Animal and Plant Cells'. Can You Tell Me What You Think Of It?

you may need to elaborate more because this seems a bit short.

you can go into detail of photosynthesis and how sunlight is converted into energy for plants. and for animals how sugar is converted into energy during cellular respiration.

and take out "to begin with" -- that's too colloquial.

good job otherwise!!

Great content, I think you have good information. However, If this is an essay, I would focus on your structure a bit...

You know:
(1)Topic Sentence
   (2) Supporting Detail (one diff)
      (3) Explanation (explain the difference)
   (2)
      (3)
   (2)
      (3)
(C) Conclusion (restate topic sentence)

*as I read, I found most of the Information that would be put into these categories, just some were unorganized, for instance...
(1) Plant and animal cells have many similarities and differences. (very good)

 In your second sentence, you say that they are both eukaryotic. This would be more of a similarity, and somewhat off topic, I would clean this up.

~difference in vacuoles (good)
~cell walls (good)
~photo. (good)
~chloroplast (good)

Like I stated in the beginning, you have the right information, just needs a bit more organization, then you will be good to go... ^.^ good luck

~*~ one last thing, not to controdict Robin, but, I do not think you should go into detail on photosynthesis, because this essay is not focused on the proccess of photo. but the differences between plant and animal cells...